Tuesday, November 27, 2007

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why study in America
Go abroad to study is a good choice.Although many countries want to international students come, most of them choose America. In particular, America has 6 universities in ten tops universities of the world and the goverment cost 54,314 millions dollars in education.Three reasons that study in America are get a good job after graduate, become indenpend and open eyes.
First, people who have an American degree can find a good job because they can speak English very well, they learn a lot of different business styles and also American degree is accepted very easily. As we know, the world become smaller and smaller, no matter what job you have, you should talk to people. English is the most useful language of the world, if people study in America, they must past a English test, such as TOEFL, GRE and GMAT. After that, they can go to classes, speak, listen and write English all day. When they graduate, they have a very good English skill. They can almost talk to people from everywhere, that is why they can get a good job. People in America from many different countries, they have different styles to do business. Study in America can learn these styles easier, they are good for business. For example,.....Another reason that can get a good job after graduate from American university is American degree is the most powerful degree. For example......If people have an American degree, most of them can find a good job because they have a social skill, it help them to be an elite.
Second, people who study in America can become indenpend.
The last reason that study in America is open eyes.

3 comments:

Ai Nguyen said...

I think you should say more about the outcome of international student after graduating in front of you introduction. After that you say about study abroad is a good choice.

Kaitlyn said...

I think you should move your thesis sentence to the end of your introduction. And make sure your got to leave space between every sentence^^

Pooh said...

I think the first sentence should be changed like "Going abroad...". Also, you should change your thesis statement to make it better.