Wednesday, September 5, 2007

Journal Entry # 5

What is your favorite season? Write a paragraph.
My Favorite Season
My favorite season is summer for three reasons.
First, my favorite sports is swimm, basketball and baseball. I think these sports only can be done in summer for me. If i do it in winter, I will hurt.
Second, I met my girlfriend in summer, it is a good memory for me. We celebrate it on August 11,. That is why I like summer very much, although it is very hot.
Third, I am a lazy student. I want to have rest, in summer, students have a long holiday but in winter, we only have a short holiday.
In conclusion, I love summer because my favorite sports can be done, I have a good memory and also I can have a long holiday to do whatever I want. For these reasons, I love summer.

1 comment:

Jimmy said...

You present your points very well. I like how you are organized. However, this was meant to be a paragraph, not an essay. Don't hit 'enter' each time you start a new idea.